Nate-Pyrokai's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[360 - Console Wars]

Good Concept, Eh delivery

Before I say anything else, Wii for the Win.

Anyways, I like the idea you had but it could've been done much better. It's obvious you're fairly new to flash so I won't hold that against you. The Audio was pretty lousy at parts and certain things you could've spent a little more time on.

So I give you a 3 in the Vote

[SSAM #5]

The END?!

Well I just watched the whole series and I must say I am very impressed not only by the story but by the evolution of the art work. All of them look really good and your style works really well.

The only problem I had was the ending on this one was way too abrupt. If the red-haired girl had been relavent in the rest of the series it would've left me with a sense of closure that the two right people ended up together if not for a moment, but that didn't seem to be the case.

I demand a sequal to this, it's too good an idea to leave on that kind of cliffhanger D:

[How Does It Feel?]

I hope to God you're not YTMND's JoshCube

Not a very good animation. The bulk of the file size just from the music and that's pretty pointless. Try something longer next time. This looks like it took you all of 1 hour to do... which is giving you credit for the ok menu screen with the ball =/

JoshCube responds:

IM SORRY! NOONE UNDERSTANDS!

[Hello, Fred The Beard]

Logan Whitehurt (R.I.P) = Genius

Great work. I recently got into Logan Whitehursts music after watching OHMYGODIMONFIRE (done by another flash artist, not sure who.)

Fred the Beard is one that stood out amoung the many amazing tracks in Mr. Whitehursts line-up. I'm acctually considering doing a Flash version of "Farkle" because I love Farkle =D

Anyways, impressive job, solid and funny. Also 4 for violence becuase of the beard shaving. D:

RWappin responds:

The guy who made OHMYGODIMONFIRE actually already made a flash for Farkle.

You should do the second one, or Farkle: New and Improved. :D

[==SevenStar== Episode 005]

Hahhahahahahaha!

Hah! Wow you guys are terrible. I must honestly say after a while that flash had me laughing but this is not portal material. Sorry, try again though. You really do have something with those intros. If you really could only extend you attention spans.

=D

Gavin responds:

t3h teh w00pa

made it past the portal homie

[Mario and ADHD]

Solid. very... what's that over there?

This was a very well done Flash. I must say that as far as Dane Cook goes I have mixed feelings. That album was great however and you completely did justice to a lot of those routines. Vicious Circles (his HBO special) seemed a bit too Frat Boyish.

If you make a sequal or some other kind of game with ADHD I'll be sure to look out for that and if I get the time I'll look at the rest of your work (I'm on dial-up so it's kinda hard o_o)

4/5

[Wikipedia]

For those who don't want to do acctual research

Uhh... well I watched this twice and I honestly still don't get it. The fight scenes were pretty fluid but all in all they were still only stick figures which really took a lot away from the whole toon.

There were a couple of decent effects but really nothing redeeming enough. You have a really good sense of Animating, I can tell. Just see if you can evolve past stick figures with monotone backgrounds.

[12.3 seconds of violence]

w00t

I say it =o

Well anyways this was pretty good, I liked it atleast. I saw you put a lot of effort into making this cool and actiony and I respect that.

If anything I'd say make it longer and give it a reason. You could do the fight scene of a dramatic flash toon really well... Thumbs up man, keep up the good work.

pyro786 responds:

Thanks so much. ALl of you're crits really will help me.

[The Ultimate Showdown]

Chuck Norris Owns

That flash was definetally one of the best I've ever seen. Everything you did was spot on except for inconsistancies... but I sorta balme the song for that... and I'm just being a total fathead trying to find any flaws at all.

But yea, This is awesome, so awesome.

[MahnaMahna - (._.)]

Uhhh

Ok, I understand that you like that song and I guess it's ok... hence the 7 in sound.

However to think you acctually spent 5 hours on this is incomprehensible! I mean honestly I'm a bit of a flash newbie myself and that floating piece woulda taken me maybe an hour tops...

If you would like to bring some honor to this song then consider making a skit to go along with it, there was nothing to what you did besides the song.

Drink Flash. Play Again.