Nate-Pyrokai's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jedi vs. Ninja]

Ninjas are Awesome

I'm having trouble believing that you drew any inspiration at all from Naruto because your Ninja character appeared to be a legit Ninja. Perhaps I am sadly mistaken. Anyways I'm glad the Ninja did win though, anybody with Half a Brain knows a Ninja can defeat anything.

Even Dragorgons...

Great little piece of flash. A Little rough, but hell, you pull it off. Keep up the good work man.

[Mario & ADD]

Anticlimactic?

I'm not sure if that was ADD o_O but I'll trust you on it.

This flash was too short and not really all that funny. If you have more "ADD" skits then I could justify this flash, but one 20 second thing isn't going to cut it.

You can do better (as you said), just work at your flash a little longer.

Bomber109 responds:

Yeah, I should have worked longer on this and had something better to work off of.

[Weird Al's Best]

Great Effort

While a few things in your flash can be seem as not so good, the reusing of scenes, you more than made up for that with the rest of your flash. I've always kind of wanted to do a video for Hardware store but you've officially given the song it's justice so I won't even try.

But excellent use of special effects (The cool background) and excellent improve at the end of the song.

Overall it's only a 7 though because of the reuse of scenes and you still have a ways to come as an animator however it was fairly evident how much you'd improved since the start of the project to it's finish.

[Jerry]

Excellent Piece of Work

And that's why you should get your High School diploma kids!

Very funny flash. Great sense of time and just the general monotony in Jerry's life. Kinda did predict the ending but it was well worth watching the whole flash.

5 out of 5

[Phoenix Correct!]

Ambitious but Subpar

This was a great idea and I give you kudos for trying it but it wasn't nearly as good as it could've been.

The voice acting was the highlight, it was really good quality and pleasant to listen to but what killed it was the music choice. The acctually Phoenix Wright music would've worked a lot better.

Also your art wasn't that good. You have potential as an artist but everything seemed very rough and thrown together.

I assume you don't have a Wacom Drawing Tablet or anything of the sort. If you don't I recommend getting one if you want to improve the quality of your computer art. I know it helped me when I got one.

So I can't say this is a bad flash, I just think it was just generally weak. Keep doing cartoons, by the looks of your style I know you really could have something working for you in the future.

[Reiko - Captive Audience]

Well, it was definately something

Not a bad animation, no. Just painfully painfully short. Not that I could imagine that much more going into this concept. Perhaps having one of the children blink would've amped up the effect of the morbidocity.

But it is nice to see something new from you, Foamy is great but can get annoying D:

So 7. Good Content but not enough of it.

[FlashBack 00]

Excellent Piece of Fighting Action

Very well animated and fun to watch no doubt. Very well put together. The only issue is I was kinda lost as to what was going on at some points, and I have played Pico's School so it's like I'm uniformed XD But it didn't take away from the presentation at all.

Also in the Credits to be fair P-Bot was created by Andrew Dickman, just in case you didn't know.

[Axis and Allies (4/16)]

Excellent use of Audio

The art for this flash was ok, I've never been too big a fan of the pure tweening style but it works with your art style so I'm not going to complain.

What really impressed me was the solid use of BGM and Sound FX. Everything was spot and gave me a real sense of the situation. So kudos on that.

I can't wait to see what you do next in this flash, I will be watching for it.

[you can't kill me]

Far more Powerful than a Journal

Wow, I watched this submission and for only a days work of animation that was really epic. Really. I'm a veteran of deviantART (I've left now) and I've seen loads of weird cases of favoritism there amoung other sites I've spent time on. Now SheezyArt is doing Journal Bans? I never really liked that site to begin with, always look kinda like the bastard child of deviantART.

But excellent Flash, I'm acctually gonna check out some of the other works you've done now on dA and such. Also excellent Audio, you're voice acting was extremely good and I love that song.

You win.

[AA- ERUPTION!!]

Well Atleast you aren't the Kitty Krew

Eh, another group not to care about.

Not bad motion tweening, nothing really much to say about this toon. Art was decent and the preloader looked nice.

Yea.

Do something longer with more stuff. You cat do Eet!

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