Pretty Good
One thing I liked about this Flash was it felt like I was watching an actual cartoon. It wasn't just a short string of fart jokes that lasted 30 seconds, this obviously took a lot of dedication.
The only downside was that the animation was a little rough. It must be tough to really buckle down and do animation well, but you really do have some ability, so for your next animation clean it up a little. Don't take any one scene or series of actions for granted.
I did enjoy this though, as I do most of your stuff Edd. Can't wait to see what you come out with next.