Nate-Pyrokai's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spares]

Pretty Good

One thing I liked about this Flash was it felt like I was watching an actual cartoon. It wasn't just a short string of fart jokes that lasted 30 seconds, this obviously took a lot of dedication.

The only downside was that the animation was a little rough. It must be tough to really buckle down and do animation well, but you really do have some ability, so for your next animation clean it up a little. Don't take any one scene or series of actions for granted.

I did enjoy this though, as I do most of your stuff Edd. Can't wait to see what you come out with next.

eddsworld responds:

Glad you liked the jokes and such, i'm still a lightweight at smooth animation - but i hope to improve more in the future!

[D**k Attack]

Oh boy

Damn... now I feel as though somebody needs to parody this.

BurningBunnies responds:

Oh god, it'll be the next awesome or 'My Newgrounds' series now.

What have I done.

[Mario & ADD]

Anticlimactic?

I'm not sure if that was ADD o_O but I'll trust you on it.

This flash was too short and not really all that funny. If you have more "ADD" skits then I could justify this flash, but one 20 second thing isn't going to cut it.

You can do better (as you said), just work at your flash a little longer.

Bomber109 responds:

Yeah, I should have worked longer on this and had something better to work off of.

[AA- ERUPTION!!]

Well Atleast you aren't the Kitty Krew

Eh, another group not to care about.

Not bad motion tweening, nothing really much to say about this toon. Art was decent and the preloader looked nice.

Yea.

Do something longer with more stuff. You cat do Eet!

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[How Does It Feel?]

I hope to God you're not YTMND's JoshCube

Not a very good animation. The bulk of the file size just from the music and that's pretty pointless. Try something longer next time. This looks like it took you all of 1 hour to do... which is giving you credit for the ok menu screen with the ball =/

JoshCube responds:

IM SORRY! NOONE UNDERSTANDS!

[Hello, Fred The Beard]

Logan Whitehurt (R.I.P) = Genius

Great work. I recently got into Logan Whitehursts music after watching OHMYGODIMONFIRE (done by another flash artist, not sure who.)

Fred the Beard is one that stood out amoung the many amazing tracks in Mr. Whitehursts line-up. I'm acctually considering doing a Flash version of "Farkle" because I love Farkle =D

Anyways, impressive job, solid and funny. Also 4 for violence becuase of the beard shaving. D:

RWappin responds:

The guy who made OHMYGODIMONFIRE actually already made a flash for Farkle.

You should do the second one, or Farkle: New and Improved. :D

[==SevenStar== Episode 005]

Hahhahahahahaha!

Hah! Wow you guys are terrible. I must honestly say after a while that flash had me laughing but this is not portal material. Sorry, try again though. You really do have something with those intros. If you really could only extend you attention spans.

=D

Gavin responds:

t3h teh w00pa

made it past the portal homie

[12.3 seconds of violence]

w00t

I say it =o

Well anyways this was pretty good, I liked it atleast. I saw you put a lot of effort into making this cool and actiony and I respect that.

If anything I'd say make it longer and give it a reason. You could do the fight scene of a dramatic flash toon really well... Thumbs up man, keep up the good work.

pyro786 responds:

Thanks so much. ALl of you're crits really will help me.

[God is real]

<_< No point

Ok, this wasn't bad, I'll give you that. This sorta just was a waste of time, it made no sense and was surprisingly short. I've gotta say this, if your gonna make your intro THAT flashy, then back it up with the episode

PlexityMusic responds:

Locks owns all